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Chapter 7


Mr. Hittbone’s Rules

“Rule Forty-two. All persons more than a mile high to leave the court.”

Everybody looked at Alice.

“I’m not a mile high,” said Alice.

“You are,” said the King.

“Nearly two miles high,” added the Queen.

“Well, I shan’t go, at any rate,” said Alice: “besides, that’s not a regular rule: you invented it just now.”

You never want to fall asleep in Mr. Hittbohm’s second period math class, no matter what, because he will leave you full stop asleep until you eventually wake up, whenever that is. It’s one of the rules written on his personal rules board at the front of the class.


Classes will come and go and no one is allowed to wake up sleepers.

If you fall asleep he just lets you sleep, no shaking you up, and you miss the next class, and even the class after that. You wake up and it’s, oh, MY GOD! You get major detentions for missing classes at St. Mel’s. It doesn’t matter if it wasn’t your fault. Mr. Hittbohm doesn’t care that maybe you had homework for six classes and had to do work around the house, too.

Nobody cares when you’re explaining.

Once a guy fell asleep for three straight periods. When he woke up Mr. Hittbohm was at the podium lecturing, just like always, but after the guy looked around he saw there weren’t any familiar faces. There were different guys in the class. He just bolted out of the room. He hadn’t technically skipped any classes, but he got a butt load of detentions.

It’s not a school rule. It’s Mr. Hittbohm’s rule.

I woke up halfway through his class one day after a long night at home. “Did you sleep good?” he asked.

“No, I made a few mistakes,” I said. He didn’t like that.

“You boys grow up without rules, without boundaries,” he told us the first day of school. “You need discipline. You can be yourself, whatever you think that is, once you’ve learned the rules.”

Lots of rules and no mercy, that’s Mr. Hittbohm, like he just stepped out of the Old Testament. Mr. Rote and the rest of the religion teachers teach the New Testament, but that news flash has never reached Mr. Hittbohm.

It’s not ten thousand years ago, Mr. Hittbohm! But, he doesn’t care about that, either.

Everyone says he’s been at the school since it opened, or maybe even before that. He was probably waiting for the big day to happen. He’s only ever taken two days off in all those years. He told us about them on the second day of school. “It wasn’t because I was sick,” he said. He’s never been sick. Someone else was sick on those two days.

Maybe he ever only feels like crap in private.

Mr. Hittbohm’s a short man with a beach ball belly. He pulls his pants up almost to his nipples. He doesn’t wear a jacket. He only wears a dress shirt. He has grayish gray hair and he’s a grumpy man. His eyes are the color of an old telephone pole. Everybody hates him, the upper classmen, and us, just everybody, really.

Some of the upper classmen add an S to the front of his name, but never out loud to his face. That would be a disaster if it slipped out. Mr. Hittbohm is the MASTER OF DETENTIONS. It’s not even funny.

He’s married, but told us he couldn’t stand his wife because she never turns off the house lights and watches TV all the time. “She even shops in bed thanks to television.”

He has a son and daughter, but he doesn’t talk about his son. When he told us about his daughter he said he was angry about how in the first year of whatever job she got she was making more money than him.

He always says money is a “masterpiece in the eye of a masterpiece,” whatever that means.

“God wants us to prosper and have plenty of money. Money is how you keep score. That’s why you don’t want to stop at simple math, because then you’ll only make simple math money.”

He smokes between classes, ripping the filters off his cigarettes. I’ve never seen another teacher smoke on campus, only him. He throws them on the ground, mashes them, and lights up another one.

Whenever anybody tells him cigarettes are bad for you, he scowls.

“When it looks like I’ll live longer than my next cigarette I’ll scrape it off the bottom of my shoe,” he says.

Whenever anybody tells him cigarettes are practically illegal, he gets mad about that, too.

“The government tells you smoking is bad for your health, but when you Ben Franklin it the government has killed more people than cigarettes ever did, or ever will.”

He told us he was in a gas station buying cigarettes when somebody tried to rip off the attendant with some kind of money trick.

“I wanted to beat him with a bat,” said Mr. Hittbohm, making fists, his hands trembling.

He said that. He said beat him WITH A BAT to beat the hell out of him. Every day the forecast for Mr. Hittbohm is clouds, rain, and grumpy.

He teaches from a podium at the front of the class. He’s the only teacher in the school who has one. How does he rate? It’s because he’s an OLD DINOSAUR and gets his way. He puts his papers and things on the podium and hardly moves all period, unless he wants to tear up something that’s on your desk. That’s another one of his rules.


Even if you’re not doing anything with whatever is on your desk, like a science assignment for Mr. Strappas, if he sees it he’ll just swoop down on you and take it.

“I don’t think you’ll be needing this,” he says, and rips it up.

He’s constantly looking for things to rip up, even though it’s something for one of your other classes, not even his class, something you were just looking at. He’s always showing up all of a sudden and tearing your work into shreds.

He has a ton of rules on his board, more than fifty of them, a butt load of them.


If you chew gum anywhere on campus, not just in his class, beware him spotting you doing it. He jots down your name in his little spiral notebook and reports you. He gives you a full detention, which is forty-five minutes. He NEVER gives minor detentions. Mr. Hittbohm told us chewing gum is rotten and should be banned from the school.

“If you can’t swallow it, don’t chew it.”

No one is allowed to touch anything in his classroom, either.


If you pass by one of his special teacher books and you sort of graze it, you get a major detention. If you pick up a marker at the board without first asking permission, you get a major detention. If you punch somebody’s arm, even though it’s none of his business, you get a major detention.

It’s nothing like my next class, which is our science class. The teacher is Mr. Strappas, who’s one of the varsity football coaches. He’s young, has blond hair he combs back, and is very fit. He played football in college and he’s a nice man. He encourages us to touch things and the only rule he has is no talking when he’s talking.

It’s always the same guys who get it wrong, who do all the talking, breaking the rule. We sit two to a table and those two guys are somewhere in the middle of the room. They talk about video games, sports, and all their other dumb stuff. Mr. Strappas will say, no talking, and they will say, sorry, but they don’t stop. They don’t get good grades on their quizzes and tests. They don’t turn their homework in on time and get bad marks for effort.

They’re just stupids.

Mr. Strappas doesn’t stand at his lectern. He roams back-and-forth, to the sinks, the whiteboard, and all around the room. He’s always on the move. It’s my favorite class of the day. I actually like learning in it. It’s fun finding out about atoms and geology and everything he’s interested in.

Mr. Strappas expects us to be in our seats when his class starts, but he doesn’t sweat it out of us if it doesn’t happen. If you’re not in your seat when the bell rings at the instant Mr. Hittbohm’s class starts you get a full detention. Everybody should be in their seats when class starts, we all know that, but if you’re standing there for a second, just fixing your belt, he gives you a detention, anyway. It’s totally retarded stupid, but that’s another one of his rules.


Because it’s Mr. Hittbohm you absolutely want to make sure you’re all good. You want to be perfect. We wear ties, dress shirts, dress pants, a belt, undershirt, and black shoes. We have to make sure we’re all buttoned up. If any button is even half unbuttoned it means a full detention. He really hates it if the second button on your shirt is undone.

Even though Mr. Hittbohm is a hundred years older than Mr. Rote, it’s one for the button in first period and two for the button in second period.

He hates casual dress days, too.

“It’s like a casual walk through the insane asylum,” he says.


If there is any piece of paper on the floor around or near your desk at any time of the class he’ll give you a detention, even if it’s not yours, and even if you didn’t see it in the first place. If the paper has your name on it, it’s even worse, because he rips it up before giving you the detention.

Mr. Hittbohm has a Bible of rules.


We’re supposed to face front when we’re in class, but there are some guys who sit right by the windows and sometimes they can’t help flattening their eyes against the glass.


If Mr. Hittbohm and I looked out the same window I don’t think we would see the same thing, no matter how you did the math.

Sometimes I think that since I didn’t have a hand in making his rules, the rules have nothing to do with me. He always says Cloud 9 is amazing. But, what’s wrong with Cloud 8?  No matter what, though, you can’t fight Mr. Hittbohm. He’s like Godzilla. He swats you down with his horny tail.

At the end of class we can’t jump up and go like in any of our other classes. His rule about the bell for ending class is that it isn’t the school bell, but his bell that matters. When the school bell goes off we have to stay in our seats until he says we can go.

At the end of class I’ll say, “See you tomorrow Mr. Hittbohm.” And he’ll say, “Thanks for the warning, Mr. Who It.”

My middle name is Wyatt, so he calls me Who It, as in Why It, Who It, and then he laughs.

Sometimes it seems like he wants you to lie down at his feet like a guinea pig and say, “Yes, sir, I’ll go dig up those apples, sir, whatever you say.” His rules have nothing to do with it. He’s just a cranky old-fangled DOWNPRESSER man.


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Chapter 6


Turning Your Colors

“Somehow it seems to fill my head with ideas – only I don’t know exactly what they are!”

I don’t remember much of anything in my life before the ruckus I got into at pre-school. It was all because of Sandy’s hairspray, which I remember even now. I barely remember pre-school, but the scrap is the first thing I can recall clearly.

We were all sitting at a table eating lunch and next to me was a kid named Bobby. I pretended to hairspray him. I knew about hairspray because Sandy had started using it at home. She would stand in front of a mirror in the bathroom waving a can around. Later in life she used it all the time. Otherwise she looked like a porcupine.

I had never seen anything like hairspray before. I couldn’t stop thinking about it. I did it to him, pretend hairsprayed him, and he got SPITTING MAD. I don’t know why I did it or why he got mad. We started hitting each other. It was a long time ago.

We were only four-years-old.

When I was five I went to kindergarten. Looking back I don’t remember much of what we did there, either. I do remember we spent most of the time on a carpet, which was brightly colored, and we got prizes at the end of the day if we had been good.

Mrs. Papp was our teacher. She had a round, pudgy face and brown hair past her shoulders. It fell forward when she leaned down and gave us our goodies. I liked the way her hair smelled. It smelled fresh.

The next year Mrs. Kreese was our teacher. She was old and looked like a witch, but she wasn’t mean. Every day she wore mismatching socks. She always wore a dress, but never nylons, just ratty socks. She walked in clunky black shoes with thick heels, not flat shoes like most of the other grown-ups.

I think she knew what we said about her, because I heard her say to a kid who was being bad one day, “Your mother wants you to be good, and if you don’t be good, since I’m a witch, I’m going to come to your house in the middle of the night, to your bedroom when you’re asleep, and haunt you.”

In 2nd grade I hit my teacher with a pencil, although I didn’t mean to do it. Mrs. Lemons was tall, with gray hair, and liked ice cream. My dad and I saw her all the time at the East Coast Custard stand in Fairview Park across the bridge from the hospital. It happened when we were sitting on a rug at the back of the classroom and I was tossing a pencil up and down. It suddenly flew out of control and hit her on the arm.


Everyone in class had their own special number and a card at the front of the room. If you were bad you had to turn your card. We called it turning your colors. It was like turning over a new leaf, although sometimes it was an old leaf. There were different colors, which were green, yellow, and red. Green was good and red was bad. If you were always good you never had to turn a color. But, if you were bad, you had to flip it, showing everybody you had been bad.

After a certain number of days, if you were being good and not turning your card, you got a prize, like candy or a little toy. Sometimes we made our own little toy.

One day in 2nd grade a friend of mine and I we were in the bathroom when we saw one of the first graders come in. He always pulled his pants and underwear down all the way when he went to pee. He pulled them down to his knees.

While he was busy we snuck up behind him, spun him around, and slid him into one of the stalls, closing it and holding the door shut. He was stuck in there. But, the lunch lady came in when she heard all the noise he made and we got in trouble.

We had to go see the principal and listen to his lecture. That was the highlight of the day, at least until I had to go home.

By then, by the time I was in 2nd grade, it was just dad, me, and Sandy my older sister at home. My mom was gone. I didn’t know then what had happened, other than the butt load of yelling and fighting between her and dad had stopped, and she was just gone.

I had the time of my life after that. It was my dad and me and my dad on our own. If I did something bad he wouldn’t be happy about it, but he wasn’t too fussy. He just dumped stuff. He brushed it off. He knew how to roll with the punches. I could have all my friends over in the summer and play outside until eleven o’clock at night. We ran around the house with nerf guns and had a ball.

Dad didn’t care. He was very loose.

“You’re so annoying,“ said Sandy.

She would complain all the time, but I didn’t listen, unless she was making dinner. I listened to her at least once a day since she made dinner every night.

It was awesome to not have a mom in the house. If I had it to do over again, same thing, sure, I definitely would. I didn’t miss my mom, not really. I loved her when she was there, but that was a long time ago. It was fine back then, but I was small, and needed her more. When my mom was gone she was gone and that was all there was to it. She never came back, although we still saw her sometimes, although none of us ever usually wanted to.

Once she was gone I got my first air soft gun. I could never have one when she was around. But then my Uncle Valdas sat on it and broke it in half. I knew he did it on purpose because he didn’t want me to have a gun, even though he had been in the Russian Army for three years.

“I’ll give you forty dollars for it,” he said, holding the two broken halves in his hands in his lap.

I have one now that’s really expensive, a really great gun, the second one my dad has gotten me. It’s fully automatic and shoots little plastic pellets that can sting. I shoot things with it. I go to air soft wars with my friends. We pile into military attire and have actual battles. Everyone has to wear eye protection so we don’t shoot our eyes out.

When I was in 3rd grade my teacher called me fathead. That was pretty HORRIBLE. She called me other names, too, but the worst thing she called me was that. Mrs. Trollan was a prim and proper ex-nun. She wasn’t tall and wore her hair short around her face. She looked like an ugly holy roller, but maybe a little prettier than a roller.

She sat at her desk in a proper way and stood in a proper way. That’s just how she was. I was never sure if I was on her bad side, or not, but she called me fathead all the time. She did it in front of everybody.


I sat in the middle of class, so it’s not like she had her watch on me. Besides, I never really did anything bad. It was just a boat load of a bad year.

The next year our 4th grade teacher, Mrs. Coconea, went a little crazy toward the end of the year. The troublemakers in class called her Mrs. Cocaine, even though she was a nice lady, and probably didn’t do any drugs. She had a son in the Air Force and two boys in high school. But, there were too many bad kids in the class for her to cope. They disobeyed and lied all the time, even though no matter how much 4th graders think they can outsmart teachers, they really can’t.

I never knew if Mrs. Coco knew that, or not.

It wasn’t about being smart, though. They were always getting in trouble, but Mrs. Coconea couldn’t put a stop to it. She wasn’t strong enough. Her days were a nervous breakdown divided by before lunch and after lunch. She couldn’t even eat a sandwich in peace.

No one ever called her Mrs. Cocaine to her face, but everybody knew about the dub. I was never sure if she knew, although I think she did.

The next year I almost got into trouble in 5th grade, but didn’t because I told the truth about what happened in the playground, which was a good thing because they had it on video, anyway. None of the other kids told the truth and they had to pay the price. Some of them couldn’t tell the truth without lying, anyway.

We were messing around in the playground pantsing each other. When you pants somebody you run up to them and pull their pants down. Unless you go to a private school nobody wears belts in 5th grade. No belts. Pants are loose. But, you only pull the pants down, not the underwear.

The idea is to shine a light on the tighty-whities.

There was a kid lurking nearby. He wasn’t one of us, not in the group. He was one of the all-of-the-time annoying kids. We were messing around and he was watching us. Someone pantsed one of us, and we were all pushing each other, running around, laughing it up. All of a sudden, the lurker came running from behind and pantsed one of our group.

It was his own private ambush! He started cracking up. He thought it was so funny, at least until I whirled on him and pantsed him back.

Then he didn’t think being pantsed himself was funny.


He got sad and weepy and crawled away. We were, like, whatever, and walked off. Somebody told the rest of the class about it, and one of the kids told his mom, and then the school found out. Everybody else lied about it and said they hadn’t done anything, but I owned up to it. The others all got an in-school suspension, but I didn’t get into any trouble, at all.

We didn’t know then that they had video cameras outside, watching us in the playground. We all knew they were in the hallways, but we hadn’t seen them outside. But, after that we could see them and knew where they were.

They have cameras so they can see whatever goes on and know about it. THEY KNOW! When Billy pushes Josh down in the hall and kicks him in the face, they know, and the hammer comes down. What I think is only God should be on the surveillance camera team. Or, maybe bounty hunters, too, so they can collect the reward.

Cameras are stupid. It’s usually just the public schools that have lots of cameras. St. Mel’s has only two of them.

One of them is in front of Mr. Krazakios’s office and nobody knows where the other one is. Everyone knows Mr. K.’s camera isn’t a real one. It’s a replica. Mr. Krazakios is one of the Latin teachers. Everyone thinks he’s on crack, although not really on crack, but like uncommon nonsense. He’s a wild man who during assemblies will run up and down the bleachers pushing guys out of the way and sitting them down.

Sometimes Mr. K. says the Morning Prayer on the P. A. and it’s the creepiest thing. He sounds like Orphan Esther. It’s just MESSED UP.

He’s on the older side, skinny, and really quick on his feet. He has short scratchy gray hair and wears checked suits. He knows thirteen different languages, even Lithuanian, and he’s learning Chinese. Last year he broke his leg trying to skateboard and made his own cast for it. He healed up with no problem.

I started skateboarding in the 3rd grade. I have a lot of memories of that, of skateboarding outside and learning tricks. I rode everywhere and it was so much fun. No one could tell me what to do when I was on my skateboard. I loved going fast. Some kids would attach a leaf blower to their board to go faster. I never did that. But, I got bruised and hurt all the time. Any flick of your foot or a blast of wind could send your board whipping. Every time I tried to kick flip down some stairs it was anybody’s game out there.

But, I don’t skateboard anymore.

I stopped when I was in 5th grade because too many bad kids skateboarded. They were hoodlums riding a toy. I wasn’t friends with the bad kids, although I was at first, skating together with them. I was always hanging out with them, even though I’m a nice guy. I’m not a bad guy, at all. I figured out it wasn’t a good thing, though. They weren’t good people to be with, so I stopped skating altogether.

A lot more bad kids skateboarded than good kids. It’s a stereotype, or a close-to-the -bone stereotype, but that’s the way it is. The kids who don’t have anything to do, or who don’t have a good home life, they skateboard. That’s definitely not me.

When I was in 6th grade I totally stopped hanging out with most of those kids. By then I was in advanced placement classes and was with the same thirty good kids the whole day. They became my real friends. None of them were bad kids.

A bad kid is someone who’s a JERK in class and gets in TROUBLE all the time. They talk back, don’t show up, and do drugs. There were a crap load of those kids in middle school who did drugs. They would wear bell-bottoms from the 70s and tight-roll them. They didn’t do PCP or cocaine, not really, not that anybody knew, or wanted to know. Most of them just smoked weed. They would talk smack to the teachers and bully other kids.

They would make fun of the special kids, especially loud laughing at them, and pushing them. My friends and I would say, step off of it, leave them alone, although they never listened to me. But, they always listened whenever we brought Nate over, who was strong and jacked out of his mind, even though he didn’t do drugs.

“Fight the biggest one first,” he always said, grinning and clapping.

It was horrible the way they treated the weak kids. It was one of the biggest things that ticked me off in middle school. I understood right away, those kids are jerks, and the kids in my advanced classes aren’t. I started hanging out with the good kids all the time. All of the bad kids were underachievers. They were in all the retarded classes. They could barely read.

By the time I was in 8th grade those kids flat amazed me, like it was a freak show, the circus. They were so stupid the teachers had to read the tests to them. Some of them were just naturally morons. The rest of them didn’t try.

I learned you have to try when I was in 3rd grade. It happened when I got my first actual project. The project was on a book we had to read. Once I had to do it I started understanding that you actually have to put time and thought and effort into things.

I knew all about it by 8th grade. Bad kids simply choose not to care.

I care because I want a good job and a good house, a nice, pretty wife who’s pretty, and good kids who go to a nice school. I started looking towards the future at the end of 8th grade, which was when I knew I would be going to St. Mel’s. By then I knew what color looked BEST on me.


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Chapter 5


Mr. Rote’s Roman Catholic Lessons

“O Tiger-lily,” said Alice. “I wish you could talk!”

“We can talk,” said the Tiger-lily: “when there’s anybody worth talking to.”

No one wants to be late for Mr. Rote’s first period Roman Catholic class because then you would have to go to his office the next day a half-hour before school and be pestered by him. That’s why I NEVER linger over my Bagel Bacon Bagel Specials.

He used to be a campus minister, who is the person who plans masses and retreats. “It’s an important job,” he said. “At least, it used to be an important job.” He was demoted after he spent too much time in his office laying around on his couch, listening to music, and drinking his special coffee.

He says his coffee is the best in the world. “You’ve got to get the right stuff. Don’t even go to the grocery store. All they have is goddamned sticks and twigs there.” He swears ten or fifteen times a day, which is surprising for a religion teacher.

He talks about his special coffee every day. If you are UNLUCKY and end up in his office, he spends half the time asking when you are going to start drinking it, rather than any time about why you’re in his office in the first place.

Mr. Rote is an Irishman. That’s what he told us, at least, although I don’t know how he can be with a name like Rote. It sounds like he should be German, like my grandmother, or something else. He has a thick brown-red beard and red-like hair. He talks in a weird, squeaky sort of voice.

Maybe he is Irish, after all.

From the moment I saw him I thought his beard was disgusting. I’m so happy that Dr. Gutman, the principal emperor, or whatever he says he is, is making him shave it off next year. I hate the beard. I used to think I might grow one when I got older, but I don’t think so anymore, especially when I see Mr. Rote rubbing his crap load of a chin.

His beard is down to his Adam’s apple. It’s not even smooth. It’s all shaggy and straggly, like the Bride of Frankenstein. It’s totally gross. Instead of sticking pencils behind his ear, he sticks them into his beard.

He keeps his hair short, so it’s not totally bad. He washes his hair all the time. He even washes it at St. Mel’s between classes. It’s never greasy. He’s youngish, not too tall or too short, and he’s got a pair of little ears. We heard he used to be fat, but in the last couple of years he’s gotten skinnier, although nobody knows how he did it. He’s a hefty heifer.

Maybe it’s his special coffee. He’s two hundred pounds, at least, although it’s not muscle weight, not at all.

He looks like a giant thumb with a beard. I think he knows it because he said the brain is a muscle, just like muscles are muscles, and he’s a brain builder. He’s probably not married because he doesn’t wear a ring and never talks about having a wife.

“When you’re twenty-eight you create your own hipness,” he told us. “It’s a cool age.”

He’s not a cool 28-year-old, at all. He’s more like a jerk. He’s full of himself. He always thinks he’s always funny. But, he never is. He likes to ask, “Oh, what are you going to be when you grow up?” Nobody ever laughs. Nobody knows why he thinks that might be funny.

None of the guys actually like him and that’s speaking for everybody. He drives an old 1990s sports motorcycle to school. It’s not even cool, when it should be, which is weird. He thinks he’s very with it, and very funny, and thinks he’s very good at playing guitar. He’s not any of those things.

There was a day when he wasn’t at school for some personal reason, which nobody understood because there’s nothing personal about him, and Mr. McKinnon came to class. He’s another teacher at school, but nobody knows what he does, exactly. We took the freshman survey that day, which St. Mel’s does, and when we got to the teacher’s part the only two teachers we raged on were Mr. Rote and Mr. Krister.

Everybody who’s had them hates them, although Coach Krister not so much, at least not when he’s coaching.

The first part of the year Mr. Rote was a nice man, but he didn’t teach us anything, and we didn’t accomplish anything. He just rambled on at random about the Bible. He said knowing the Bible and the Bible times and all the Bible bigwigs inside and out were worth more than a college education. “Would you rather be smart or saved?”

He said his class showed the way to get to Heaven, not the way the heavens work, which he said in the long run doesn’t matter. It was crazy talk.

St. Mel’s is a science and engineering and computer school more than it is anything else. It’s a Roman Catholic school full of ROMANS and hardly any CATHOLICS.

Then we started on the Exitus and Reditus Model during the third quarter, which is something he found on his computer last year, and which doesn’t have anything to do with what we were supposed to learn in our freshman year religion class. Our class was supposed to be about Jesus in scripture, but Mr. Rote had different ideas about what matters.

I don’t know what it was supposed to be about, nor did anyone else. It was just more of the same.


Mr. Rote paced up and down and talked all about the Seven Gifts of the Holy Spirit. He said it’s about seven things, which are wisdom, understanding, counsel, knowledge, fortitude, piety, and Fear of the Lord. The first four things directed the mind, while the rest directed the will, and all of it was directed toward God.

“Fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom,” said Mr. Rote, pointing up at the ceiling. “It’s the straight path to Heaven.” I don’t know much about Heaven, but Mr. Rote says one day it will suddenly be looking you right in the eye.

Mr. Rote’s scheme was about someone on the bottom and at the top there was a triangle. There was someone in the triangle. You don’t know what it is when you first look at it, but it’s supposed to be God. It has an arrow going from God to the person at the bottom, and it’s got a line down the middle, and inside there are three numbers.

“One is the exit and the other one is the return,” he explained.

It was dead quiet in class. Everybody was waiting for the explanation.

“There are three different parts to it,” said Mr. Rote “That’s the Exitus side. The first is relational, because we are all relational beings. The second is reason and intellect and the third is free will. Those are the three things we are freely given when we are born.”

We all stayed very quiet and kept waiting.

“The Reditus side has two aspects to it. The first one is God’s grace and the other one is cooperation with God’s grace. God’s grace is similar to when you go to turn on the car and it turns on.”

That’s the only example he gave us. But, that’s not God’s grace. That’s a man-made thing, I thought. It’s supposed to turn on.

He said our lives were like a maze with only one way to find the center. “Just like you’ve been created by the Son and Holy Spirit, in the same way you’re united back with them at your ultimate end. It’s all about going out from God and returning to Him.”

He was always talking about the end, even though we were still at the beginning. We were created at the end of the week, according to the Bible. Maybe he meant it was about that.

We had to do quick writes every day the rest of the year and the two things we had to use for the quick writes were the ER model and the Seven Gifts of the Holy Spirit.

“One hundred percent depends on the Holy Spirit in the pursuit of holiness,” said Mr. Rote.

I knew enough about the Holy Spirit and the Seven Gifts was something I could work with, but Mr. Rote’s ER Model drove me nuts. It drove everybody nuts. He wasn’t supposed to be teaching us that. That wasn’t what we signed up for. It was like a circular driveway you couldn’t get out of.

Unfortunately, I had Mr. Rote all four quarters of the year.

I wish I had gotten one of the other religion teachers, but I didn’t. The first two quarters he didn’t teach us much. He would talk about random stuff like life, some other stupid things, and play his guitar. He talked about music every day. He talked about it all the time, about going to open mikes and music venues, and how he played at those on weekends. He told us about every concert he went to during the summer, except he never went to anything good.

He talked about it constantly. We hated him talking about music all the time. There were twenty of us in the class. We were PRISONERS OF NOTHING. We all talked about how much we hated it. Everything Mr. Rote did was annoying.

When we did the quick writes Mr. Rote would say, “OK, you have five minutes for the quick write.” Then he would yell at somebody.

“I saw you talking,” was his favorite smack down, waving a HEFTY finger.

He yelled at Birdman all the time. Birdman is Mark Biddle, but we all call him Birdman. He thinks his nickname is funny. So does everybody else, just like everybody else likes the Birdman. Mark has to sit in the back corner with nobody around him because Mr. Rote accused him of always talking. He moved him away from everybody else.

But, the truth is, the Birdman doesn’t even ever talk.

We all hate it because Mr. Rote will just yell at you constantly, for no reason. He told Jacob, one of my friends, that he was talking. Jacob said he was sorry and Mr. Rote got in his face about it. “You’re still talking.”

“I’m saying I’m sorry,” Jacob said, and Mr. Rote said, “You don’t mean it, and you’re still talking, too, at the same time.”

“Talk to the fist ‘cause the face ain’t listening,” said Jacob behind Mr. Rote’s back, making a fist.

Mr. Rote is just the biggest jerk. If you’re over ten percent jerk you’re in trouble. And he’s over one hundred percent. Sometimes he tells us it’s tough love, but what’s the difference?


He yells at us and argues with us all the time, and no one knows why. If anyone ever tries to say anything back to him, he says, “ Do you need to stand in the hall, or should I just send you to the Dean’s Office?” If we try to tell him he’s yelling at us for something we didn’t do, that he’s accusing us for nothing, he puts us outside, or sends us to Mr. Streck in the Dean’s Office.

That’s never a good thing, because then Mr. Streck has a reason to yell.

Or, even worse, we have to go to Mr. Rote’s office before school and listen to him strum his guitar and sip his special coffee. It’s just wrong.

In the middle of the second quarter he started piling a butt load of work on us. There was just tons and tons of it. We didn’t know why because we hadn’t done anything wrong. But, then we heard all the religion teachers had a big meeting about what they had taught that year up to that time, and apparently, because he hadn’t taught us anything, he started slamming us with tons of work.

It was so annoying.

We had to read a Bible passage from the Gospels, a whole passage from Mark or Luke, and then write about it. He never gave us short, little passages we could read once. He made us read huge passages that we had to read twice to make sense of. We had to find differences and similarities and how it all related to the ER Model, which nobody understood.

If you didn’t do it exactly how he wanted it done he gave you a bad grade. If you put your own opinion into the quick write he would write something crappy in the margin saying he didn’t care about your opinion. He would give you a bad grade, too.

When we evaluated our teachers it was just a general survey, but when we started talking about them with Mr. McKinnon, we spent a little time talking about Mr. Krister and most of our time talking about Mr. Rote. Mr. Krister isn’t the greatest, but he’s more like an uncle who pulls out his camera in the middle of dinner, so he’s not terrible.

I don’t know what Mr. McKinnon’s exact job is, but we all know he’s an important man, so we told him everything. Everybody said how much we hated Mr. Rote, how he didn’t teach us anything, and just wasted our time with homework. We told him how he yelled at us for no reason, about his bad music, and special coffee. But, nothing changed, even though we expected it to.

Jacob was especially mad about it. He was angry because Mr. Rote always yells at him, even more than he yells even at Birdman. Jacob sits right in front of Mr. Rote’s desk, even though Mr. Rote hardly ever uses his desk, so it seems like he would be safe and sound. Mr. Rote paces back and forth and pushes a little cart up and down the rows, yelling at Jacob from the back of the class.

It’s a cart on wheels that he carries his laptop on. He drinks water out of a Mason jar that he carries on the cart. He’s never spilled any water, ever, like it would be a miracle if he ever did spill any. Maybe it’s holy water.

Mr. Rote wears weird khaki’s and cowboy boots every day. He’s worn the same crappy tie the whole school year. “It’s a fair trade tie,” he said. He told us people in Africa made it from scratch. It’s multi-colored and has little diagonal stripes all down it. He hasn’t washed it once. It has stains all over it and it’s nasty. No one knows why he’s worn the same tie all year or why he never cleans it.

One week he spent the whole week talking about Nike and Adidas, how they aren’t fair trade companies, and how people in other countries work in sweatshops to make their shoes. He spends half his time talking about dumb stuff or answering questions about his beard.

Every day he tells us at the beginning of class that if the top button of our shirts isn’t buttoned it means we will get a detention. But, your top button can break by accident, or something else can go wrong. Everybody knows that. One morning Grant’s button broke when somebody collared him in the hallway, but when he explained it to Mr. Rote, he told Grant he should carry a sewing kit and gave him a detention, anyway

There’s a chair in the detention hall reserved for anybody Mr. Rote sends there, since it happens almost every day. Jacob accidentally set it on fire one day, but Mr. Rote replaced it with a new chair. It was shiny purple plastic.

“That way it won’t burn, just melt,” he laughed.

He’s just a whacked crazy giant thumb.


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Chapter 4


8th Grade is the Hardest Year

“So she sat on with closed eyes, and half believed herself in Wonderland, though she knew she had but to open them again, and all would change to dull reality.”

When I was a kid and in grade school Harrison Elementary School was BAD. Later on McKinley Middle School was HORRIBLE. Everything was WRONG about McKinley.

But, that’s where I found myself. It was where I found out you don’t have to be bad because bad things are going on around you. As bad as it was there were some first-rate kids doing their time there.

The day I got to McKinley, in 6th grade, we had a young vice-principal. We got along. But, the next year he got a principal’s job somewhere else. A newer older mean man got his job. On top of that, I don’t know why, but he didn’t like me.

With him and me it was better never than late. He personally had something against me. I don’t know what I ever did to him. I’m sure it was nothing.


I always showed up on time. I wasn’t a troublemaker, like a lot of the four hundred kids in the school. I didn’t come to blows. I got good grades, rather than not. I didn’t riot whenever I wanted more time in the library.

I didn’t get any detentions, although I did get some once in awhile. I mean, everyone’s going to get a detention sometime. You’ve got to do it all, hit the books, go to pep rallies, get detentions.

At an assembly one afternoon I asked Mr. Kakis, the new vice-principal, what would happen if someone brought a gun to school. “Would they get expelled?” I asked.

It was the same question I heard at an assembly at Lakewood High School I went to with my dad and Sadie. My older sister was a freshman there then, before she went to her opera college, living the Life of Riley. Everyone calls her Sandy, except the idiots who call her Sadie Masochist.

My mother named her Sadie because it means princess.

Asking that question got me in a world of trouble with Mr. Kakis. You would have thought I was going to use a gun to break kids out of detention. He just didn’t like me that much, even before that. I got called into his office about that question.

His office was like a waiting room.

In public schools all the stuff is the same. The rooms all have to have the same desks and cupboards. You walk into a class and there are desks on each side of the room, there’s an aisle, and in front there’s a teaching table. There’s a big white board across the whole front of the room and a Promethean Board in the middle. A projector shoots images on it. It’s all very smart, all computerized, and stuff. There’s a computer on the teacher’s table and they have shelves and bookcases for their things.

The teachers always have something on their desks or office walls that’s about them. Mr. Kakis had crappy hunting duck decoys on his bookcase and duck posters on the walls. He had won a fishing contest twenty years ago and there was a dusty plaque on the wall about it, which was his trophy for hooking the fish. He also won a rib cook-off and there was a smaller plaque for that, too.

He probably wasn’t married. There weren’t any pictures of any wives or kids anywhere. He just had his crappy trophies.

“Winning takes talent, “ he said. “No almost about it.”

He was a smaller man, under five-foot-eight for sure, and mostly bald. He wore a little mustache, gray and scraggly. He was probably in his 50s, but I always thought of him as in his 60s. He looked tired worn out used up.

He was missing a finger. The pointer finger on his left hand, the whole finger, was missing. It just had a little bit of a nub left over. I never asked him what happened. He would point his missing finger at me whenever I was in his office, jabbing what wasn’t there at my chest, pointing up my shortcomings.

He was an awkward man. Sometimes he would stumble around for no reason. He always wore a faded dress shirt and dark pants. He kept a jar of lubricant on his desk. His hands were chapped. They were stubby, fat hands with blotchy marks on the backs of them.

Once at lunch he pushed a kid, which he was never supposed to do. He tried to manhandle Billy, who was my friend, against a wall, even though he hadn’t done anything wrong. Someone had told Mr. Kakis that Billy had stolen his Chicken McNuggets. They weren’t really nuggets, just nasty chicken bits school food, which was disgusting.

The cafeteria gave us milk that was four-years-old.

“It’s frozen,” they said. “It’s OK because it’s thawed out.”

Mr. Kakis stormed into the lunchroom fast and picked Billy up by his underarms, pinning him against the wall. But, Billy was taller and bigger than Mr. Kakis, even though he was only thirteen-years-old. He shrugged Mr. Kakis off of him and just walked away. He didn’t look back and didn’t even get into any trouble about it because he hadn’t done anything wrong.

Billy walked out of the lunchroom leaving Mr. Kakis behind in the dust. We all just watched. It was literally power outage dead quiet. There were more than fifty of us watching. Mr. Kakis gave us the stink eye. After he walked out nobody said anything for a minute, but then everybody started talking at once.

Mr. Kakis was mostly a mean man, overall.

At Harrison it seemed, at least, like the teachers cared about you. At McKinley they didn’t even pretend they cared. If you wanted to do better and needed help most of them truly didn’t care. In the 6th grade some of them helped. In 7th grade a few helped a little bit. But, in the 8th grade, not so ever.


Eighth grade is the hardest year, too.

“We are willing to help you,” they would say. But, they didn’t care. It was how they acted that was the tip-off. If you needed it, they truly didn’t care. They didn’t give it to you.

Mrs. Hack was one of the worst. She more-or-less cared about you in the sense that she sort of wanted you to learn. But, she would pile so much stuff on us that it was hard to learn anything.

“You’re going too fast,” we would tell her.

”We have to move on,” she’d say. “We have to get through the units.” She was obsessed with the Civil Revolution, which is what she called the Civil War.

It was toward the middle of the year when she started on it. She wanted to get to it so bad that we rushed through everything else, and then we stayed on it for most of the rest of the year. Whenever we told her she was going too fast and asked her to review something, she wouldn’t do it.

“You should know this because you’re an advanced class,” she said.

“Just because we’re an advanced class doesn’t mean we know it all,” I told her.

But, she waved me off. She was a dull tall skinny woman with bony hands. She kept her hands balled up in fists.

I wasn’t getting bad grades in her class, but I wasn’t getting good grades, either. I got good grades in most of my classes, but her class was too hard. She expected us to know everything that ever happened to Johnny Reb and the Yankees.

“I’m having trouble,” I told her. “Can I do something for extra credit to catch up?”

“No,” she said. She didn’t care. Even though I was putting out the effort and still not getting a good grade, she wouldn’t help me.

Mrs. Hack had no eyebrows and always put a ton of make-up on. She wasn’t old, just older, probably in her 50s. She was married, but nobody knew anything about her family. She had wacko hair, short, and messy. Her clothes were funky and she hunched over a little when she walked because she was so tall. She wore flats and weird dresses with stockings.

She had an accent, like she was English, but she wasn’t from England.

Mrs. Hack taught history in first period. We started school at 8:30 and there were eight periods. My other classes were math, computer, science, health, and consumer studies, which is all about cooking and etiquette. My fifth period was lunch and home base, which wasn’t like a study hall because you could run around and go crazy.

I had a Spanish class, too. There were twenty-five of us in it. Our teacher was a Spanish lady with a Ph.D. Her name was Mrs. Puga. She had been to a billion Spanish countries.

“Ola, chicos, how are you all?” was the first thing she said on the first day of school.

She told us about herself and the class and then DROPPED HER BOMB.

“After today and for the rest of the year there will be no English speaking in class,” she said. We all thought it was a joke.

But, that was about the last English we heard in class. None of us had ever taken Spanish before, but for the rest of the year we weren’t allowed to speak English. She would yell at us about it. Everybody hated the no-English rule. Nobody was OK with the all-Spanish chapter and verse. Some kids did all right, probably because they were better learners, but most of us suffered.

Mrs. Puga was short, dark, and blonde. Her hair had sweet highlights. She wore glasses, dressed nicely, but hobbled because she had had her hip replaced. Whenever she got angry she would stare at you, make faces, and her features started twitching. When she was down pressing and her face was twitching I would lean forward and look at her. I would just stare at her, dead serious.

Sometimes we would stare and stare at each other. Then she would eventually go on to something else. I would say, watching her walk away, “Not at the table, Baby Carlos.”

Everyone in class got to pick a Spanish name for themselves. It was like a nickname. I picked Carlito, or Baby Carlos. It’s from a movie about some guys who find a baby in their closet. They’re sitting at the breakfast table and one of the guys picks up the baby’s hand and starts smacking a lady’s butt with it. While he does he says, “Not at the table, Baby Carlos.”

Sometimes when Mrs. Puga talked my friend Noah and I cracked up, but then she would yell at us. She hated us pretty fast, even if we were good most of the time.

She was married and had six kids and more than twenty nieces and nephews. She kept pictures of them in the classroom, some on her desk, and showed us slides of herself on vacation with her family.

Mrs. Cash, our consumer science teacher, was a nitpicker. She yelled at us about not using the right font on a mini-project that counted for a millionth of our grade. That drove everybody crazy. She was a nut.

Science was my favorite subject.

Mr. Maxinhimer was our science teacher. He looked like an angry elf. He was short, only a little taller than me, and chunky. He was a dead-on little Oompa Loompa. His goatee fell off his face down his neck and over his collar. Noah and I played a game every day of who could touch it the most.

We would get up from our desks and try to finger it whenever we could, which was basically whenever he wasn’t looking. When we saw him in the lunchroom we always tried to walk up behind him and touch his goatee from the back.


The teachers didn’t eat with us, but they had to be in the lunchroom while we ate. We would start talking to Mr. Maxinhimer, touch his goatee, and walk away. It was only Noah and me, at first. But, after a while, we started a trend and everyone started trying to touch his beard. We were the fastest, though. Other kids tried to do what we did, but they just didn’t get it. They didn’t have the right technique.

The funniest thing was how mad Mr. Maxinhimer got. He threatened to send us to Mr. Kakis’s office. But, he would never do anything. We never grabbed or pulled his face hair, anyway, just touched it.

He showed us pictures of his family and their two little girls. He was a good dresser and dead serious most of the time, too. He would try to be funny, but he never was. He talked loud in a weird, scratchy voice. Sometimes he would sit at his desk and not do anything.

Mr. Maxinhimer was only thirty-years-old, but he was already losing his hair. He was sick 24/7, like he had the flu. His nose always ran and he sneezed more often than not.

We got shuffled from class to class at McKinley Middle School. Everybody had to do the same things all day long. We weren’t even allowed to carry bags and backpacks, for some safety reason nobody understood, so we had to trudge from classroom to locker to classroom between every period.

But, the worst thing about McKinley was that everything smelled bad most of the time, even though we were a top state-ranked school, with computer labs and all that. Someone was always spraying Axe in the hallways.

It smelled horrible, anyway.


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Chapter 3


Hail the Cross

“Contrariwise,” continued Tweedledee, “ if it was so, it might be, and if it were so, it would be; but as it isn’t, it ain’t. That’s logic.”

I didn’t in however many million years think I was going to be a St. Mel’s man. I always thought I would go to Lakewood High School, because I lived in Lakewood, and because everybody I knew was going there. So, I didn’t think too much about it.

Mel’s was Mel’s and Lakewood was Lakewood. No problem there.

I was in seventh grade when my grandfather and grandmother began talking about it. It came out of the blue, although it shouldn’t have. They wanted me to go there because it was a private school, and a Catholic school. All of their kids had gone to Catholic schools, except my Aunt Lizzie, who had to finish her high school at a public school when St. Peter’s downtown closed for good.

They probably ran out of money since they were almost in the ghetto.

I didn’t really know anything about going to St. Mel’s. I had never thought about it. But, I mostly didn’t want to go there. I wanted to be with my friends. You can be stupid with your friends, never having to explain anything. I didn’t believe many of my friends were going to be going to St. Mel’s.

Grandpa and Grandma and my parents wouldn’t stop talking about it. They wore me down. Finally I thought, whatever, they want me to go, and it’s a really good school. There’s probably no getting around this, anyway.

“OK, whatever you say, I’ll go,” I said.

I had never paid attention to St. Mel’s, although it’s only a few miles from where we live. It’s next door to City Hall and the Police Station. My dad and I had driven past it many times, but I had not paid attention to it. I hadn’t given it a glance. I had definitely never been inside. My friend Allan’s older brother went there. He told us about it. Allan and I are both there now.

But, I still didn’t want to go.

The school is in the shape of an M, at least if you see it from above, or see a picture of it taken from a drone. The legs of the M face the lake, which is on the other side of the practice field, across Clifton Boulevard.

Clifton Boulevard is the Grand Army of the Republic Highway, although it’s really just a wide street, and then north of that is Lake Road, and after that all that’s left is big old flat Lake Erie.

There used to be Indians living on the lakeshore and they wore bobcat tails on their heads. Erie means long-tailed in their language, even though bobcats have short tails. The Indians had their own way of doing things. The explorers who came exploring trapping hunting didn’t call it Lake Erie. They called it Cat Lake.

The first freshman class didn’t go to St. Mel’s because there wasn’t a St. Mel’s, yet. All one hundred of the guys had to take classes at the Lakewood Catholic Academy down the street for two years until the work on the first schoolroom was finished.

When my uncles went there enrollment was almost two thousand guys and it cost three hundred dollars a year. It was a comprehensive school back in the day. Now there are less than half as many as back then, half of them are in the pre-engineering program, and it costs more than thirteen thousand dollars a year.

That’s why most of my friends don’t go there.

It’s not a comprehensive school anymore, either. It’s a college prep school. If you look at it from the front it’s a small campus. It doesn’t have as many guys as most public schools, maybe eight hundred. They are all guys.


It started with the Holy Cross Brothers from Notre Dame, who were the Fighting Irish, although they came from France. The French Revolution was their archenemy. Their motto is “Hail the Cross, Our Only Hope.” There used to be plenty of Brothers at St. Mel’s, but there are hardly any of them left. Most of our teachers are lay teachers now.

The school used to be for working class guys, but that’s changed, too, which is funny because St. Mel was a blue-collar guy.

His mother is called the Mother of Saints because she had seventeen sons and two daughters and they all became saints. Mel worked in Ireland with his uncle St. Patrick. They built churches and monasteries. Mel supported himself by manual labor. He worked with his hands. He was like a plumber or a car mechanic would be these days. Whenever he had money or good stuff he gave most of it away to the poor.

Nobody smart does that anymore, especially not at St. Mel’s. NO CHARITY is the rule, or at least as little as possible.

He’s a saint because he could perform miracles, like plowing up live fish in the middle of farm fields. He had the gift of telling fortunes, too. I can never predict anything. It’s probably better that I can’t, anyway.

What would be the point of trying anything?

St. Mel’s feast day is a holiday for single people. It’s supposed to be all about the good things of being single. You send yourself St. Mel’s Day cards and have parties. He’s a great patron saint to have if you’re fourteen-years-old.

There’s a big sign at the entrance to our parking lot that says EDUCATING THE HEARTS AND MINDS OF YOUNG MEN.

We’ve had 400 National Merit Scholars and 34 State Champions, we’ve won 28 wrestling state championships and 11 hockey state titles, and now we’ve got basketball, baseball, rugby, volleyball, and track and field state championships, too.

You don’t want to ride the bench at St. Mel’s.

St. Mel’s wins a boat load of championships. That’s why they keep score at our school. It’s not a matter of life and death. It’s more important than that. At St. Mel’s we say go bigger or go home.

Most of the school is on the older side, but it’s all updated, with new computers, new smart boards, and new tech stuff like that. We have the Dahl Leadership Center, which is more-or-less new. Then there’s the Howe Center, which is even newer. It’s the engineering part of the school. The computer classes are there, too.

It’s very cool. NEW is what WORKS. It’s what makes the world work.

We have a small football field at the back where the JV team plays and the varsity team practices. St. Mel’s is small because it’s on such a small campus. There isn’t any room around the school to buy extra space. We’re on the edge of the street and then there’s just a bunch of large apartment buildings. They would probably be too expensive to buy and tear down, although the school obviously has plenty of money.

I’m sure they have a little cash left over after paying everybody.


A couple of years ago a new chapel was built at the side of the school. It has a gold dome, just like Notre Dame. St. Mel used to build chapels back in the day, although I don’t think any of them had gold domes. Inside the chapel is a life-size bronze sculpture of Jesus on the cross. The same man who makes all the head busts in the Pro Football Hall of Fame made the Jesus statue.

It’s like our gold dome Jesus is an ALL-PRO.

My dad and his parents and all their family wanted me to go to St. Mel’s. I was worried I was going to be away from my friends. But, once I applied, and the more I thought about it, the more I got into it.

I started thinking it might be a good thing. It’s not that public schools aren’t good, but St. Mel’s would definitely be a better school.

Actually, public schools suck.

I liked public school less and less the more and more I was there, especially later, the older I got. The lessons were always getting to be less smart more dumb going on retarded year after year. I’m glad I got out. I feel like I escaped what I was, or was becoming, or I escaped someone else’s choice for me, like I found an open door.

After my dad applied me to the school we started getting mail. We got a butt load of it, which means they must spend a butt load of money on us who are the freshmen. I got mail every day when I was in 8th grade. After being accepted I got even more, most of it about so much crap. I got bushels of forms, too, and I had to fill all of them out.

Not everybody gets in. NO WAY! A boat load of guys apply to St Mel’s, way more than a thousand, maybe even thousands. I don’t even know how many. At the public schools everybody in their own city goes to their own school. But, at St. Mel’s they drive from all over, from Parma, Maple Heights, even Twinsburg. One guy lives an hour and fifteen minutes away. And, he’s a freshman, like me.

St. Mel’s is a small school, but it has international programs, so even more guys try to get in these days. I had to take many many tests. Some of them were easy, but some were hard. Most of them were just the standardized ones, the ones everybody has to take, like math, science, and English. There wasn’t anything stupid, like history.

I didn’t know I was going to make it at first. And, I still wasn’t sure I wanted to go. I was all along almost wishing I wouldn’t get in. But, when I kept thinking about it, I thought I would still have all my old friends, because we all live in the same city. We live really close to one another and we would still see each other.

So, I kept thinking about it, and I finally knew since I would still have all my friends, St. Mel’s might be a good place for me to be. It’s a good education. Everybody talked it up and not nobody didn’t say it was bad. I thought to myself, I’m going to make a bunch of new friends, too. I started to get excited about it.

It’s a great school, after all. I found that out. At St. Mel’s they always say, if you believe in us, we’ll believe in you. I’m glad I made it. I made a bunch of new friends, too.

Many of my friends from the Lakewood middle schools applied to St. Mel’s, but only three of them made it. It’s competitive getting in, but that’s good because it makes you stronger and better. It makes you more determined. You have to watch out for the CHOPPING BLOCK.

That’s what everybody does at St. Mel’s. They chop the other guy. That’s why we win all the state championships.

I met new guys in my classes and we started talking. We’re all friends now. I still see some of the guys that went to our Lakewood schools, although I see them less. I talk to them, text, and stay in touch. We meet up sometimes and have lunch.

We have lunch at Panera Bread. I have an allowance, so I get money to go places. It’s the bare minimum, $40.00 a month, which is $1.50 a day. It’s nothing, really. I can’t make lunch on $1.50 a day, but my grandmother gives me money, and my dad gives me cash on the side. A couple of times a month he gives me pre-paid credit cards for $50.00, or more.

Sometimes he gives me $100.00. It’s for wherever I want to go and whatever I want to do. I work around the house for him. I fold clothes, wash dishes, and clean the cat crap. I do a butt load of stuff. I vacuum while they’re all sitting around living it up, all except my dad. The rest of them don’t do much, especially not Jack. He does nothing and my step mom stands up for him no matter what he doesn’t do. I get grief no matter what I do.

Sadie’s lucky. She knows it and I know it. She goes to the opera school at Baldwin Wallace College and lives in an apartment with her friends.

My dad does everything, cleans everything, and runs around all the time. He works all the time. He doesn’t get any downtime. Sometimes he relaxes and sleeps. Whenever he has a day off he makes my bed, even though I usually do it, for Scar the Beagle, so he can lie on it and be comfortable.

Blackie doesn’t like that and will stare him down.

St. Mel’s was new to all of us in our freshman class. We were all from different places, from all around Ohio, from everywhere. One of my friends is from Hinckley, wherever that is. It’s weird in the beginning because you don’t talk to anybody, not at first. Then one day you notice you’ve become friends with people you just met.

I made friends on the first day of school, actually.

The first friend I made was Hunter. He was getting in and out of the locker next to me. He’s the kicker on one of the football teams, a really good guy, and smart, too. Since our lockers were right next to each other we started talking immediately.

A friend is somebody you like to talk to. They don’t always have to say nice things to you, but, more-or-less, they do most of the time.

But, you can’t be friends with everyone. The guy in the locker on the other side of me is Ethan, who’s a big fat black guy. He’s really big, more than six foot, maybe more. He’s not mean to me, not exactly, although he is. Ethan is just not that nice.

Nice is when you are kind to other people, in general, not just your only friend, in particular. Mean is when you are a jerk-bag. Ethan needs to learn to be a nice person. Nice people are kind, modest, and caring. They are all those things. There are a load of people like that, but there are a load of people who aren’t.

Oh, YEAH! There are more people who aren’t kind.

You have to be careful about being nice. You don’t want to be cut down. Ethan, it’s just the way he is, and the way he speaks and acts towards other students. He cuts you down whenever he gets the chance.

We all go to our lockers at St. Mel’s at the same time, after the fourth period. We leave the books we had and take our other books. You go to your next class, sit down, talk to your friends, and get through the class. You don’t notice it, but you actually have your day.

St. Mel’s wasn’t the school I wanted to go to, but now I call it my school. Some people call it the facility, but most guys call it St. Mel’s. Cooper calls it THE ORGANIZATION, but that’s Cooper, always slapping his nuts. No one calls it Catholic School or High School.

When we’re on the loose my friends and I just call it Mel’s.


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Chapter 2


On the Shorter Side

“Who in the world am I? Ah, that’s the great puzzle.”

I’m on the shorter side, not too tall, and I’m on the skinnier side, too. I get through doorways easier than most. I could probably even go down a rabbit hole. That would be some kind of in Lakewood in Ohio on my street in my backyard adventure! On the sports side I run cross-country.

I have freckles, like my dad, blue eyes, and brown hair I keep trimmed. I keep it aerodynamic. I don’t change my hair all year. But, next summer once school is done I’ll get a full cut, grow it out, and let it flow chop.

That’s when your hair is in a circle. It’s all about letting your rage flow.

I’m stronger than most guys my size, but not very muscular. I’m more like lean meat. Keep your body lean and your mind sharp. My dad used to be that way when I was a baby, but he’s bulked up since then.

I’m named after St. Sebastian. He was a bodyguard for the Roman emperor.

In pictures St. Sebastian looks bigger than me, especially his pecs. I’ve been doing push-ups lately. I hit the weight room after track and get down on the bench. I do all the machines and I’m up to 85 pounds. I’m on the dumbbells, too, but only do fifteens. My forearms aren’t that strong, yet, but they will be.

St. Sebastian was the man.

He was killed shot to death after he became a Christian. But, the arrows didn’t kill him, so the emperor’s flunkies clubbed him to death, and threw him into a sewer. He was buried in France, but later Protestants looted the church and tossed his bones into a ditch. He couldn’t catch a break. After they found all the parts of him they sent him to other churches all over so it wouldn’t happen again.

He’s the patron saint of sports. I wear a sacramental medal of him.

I was good at football when I was young, but I was never big enough. Now I love running. I’m not an all-star athlete, but I’m more physically fit than most rooms full of guys, but maybe less than some, too. I’m more than fit enough to be on the cross-country team, so I’m absolutely in the better half.

Many guys are physically fit because they’re in sports. They’re all jacked to begin with, or they’re good at certain things, like soccer or football. There are others who don’t play sports, at all. At St. Mel’s you’re either fit or you’re unfit. The ones who are unfit are usually the ones who don’t play sports. They don’t want to be told what to do and they don’t want to exert any effort towards anything.

Whenever I’m running I feel free. It just completely flushes everything in me out. That’s when I do my best thinking. But, race day is different. It’s like running across a frozen lake with the ice breaking behind you. I don’t think much during races.

My teeth are almost perfect. I’ve only ever had two cavities, but I did have one tooth pulled. I was in 5th grade. One day I woke up and it hurt. It wasn’t even loose. There was something wrong with the nerve and I had to get it pulled that same day. It was so horrible it was horrible. The dentist gave me a shot of Novocain, but it wasn’t enough. When he pulled on it the first time it hurt too much and he had to stop. He gave me two more shots and after that it was all right.

I hate pain, even though I can take a lot of it, which isn’t necessarily a good thing. Mr. Rote, our religion teacher, says we measure our pain by God, whatever that means. A lot of my prayers are thanking God I’m mostly healthy. We talk about evil in class, but I think the worst evil is pain. When my grandfather got old, before he died, he was in pain all the time. He was always hunched over, but he never complained. Dad said he just had to accept it.


I’m allergic to dust mites, pollen, and deadly allergic to walnuts and pecans. I get itchy eyes from dust mites and pollen, sneeze a lot, and feel like crap. I had to get special microfiber covers for my mattress and pillows. If I eat nuts I feel sick and then I get sick. My throat hurts, it’s hard to swallow, and my stomach goes upset. It’s so deadly I need EpiPens, two of them, just in case. They pierce your skin. A needle shoots out and epinephrine makes everything go away so I don’t have to go to the hospital.

My left thumb is different than my right thumb. It happened three years ago when I was eleven. My dad and I were buying a massage for my step mom. We parked in the Beachcliff shopping lot in Rocky River and when I got out of our big body family van I slammed the door shut, except I slammed it on my thumb. It was terrible. I slammed it on my own thumb, where it got stuck.

I couldn’t comprehend it.

“Open the door, open the door!” I screamed.

When my dad finally jerked the door open my nail came off. We had to get x-rays at Lakewood Hospital. My thumb was broken and when the nail came back it came back different.

I have a scar on the left side of my neck, too. It happened last summer when I was playing Nazis and Jews at summer camp. The doctor says I’ll probably have a tattoo of it on my neck for the rest of my life.

I have a good personality. It’s better than most. I’m just being who I was made to be, although personality goes a long way. I think it’s better to be yourself. Don’t try to copy anybody else, even though they might be smarter or more successful.

Even though my personality is my personal property, it seems everyone is always trying to change it.

I like to think I’m brave and have the kind of character to rescue someone. Everyone knows I don’t have a quiet personality. I never look behind me or to the side. That’s not my identity. I don’t want to know who I used to be. That’s over and done. I’m only interested in who I am now.

The past is where I grew up, and I liked living there, but everybody knows YOU CAN’T GO BACK TO YESTERDAY.

I’m nice to everybody, unless they’re a jerk. Then I’m not going to be nice to them. I don’t mind what some guys think of me because I know there are other guys who don’t think that, not at all. There are many nice people like me, who are kind and considerate.

You can’t judge a book by its cover. That’s what a lot of people do. I don’t do that. I’m open-minded, but I don’t like it that adults always try to put things I don’t want into my mind. I don’t like that.

I’m not very emotional. I’m more of a happy person, not a crazy high and low guy. I know everybody gets sad and depressed. I try to give them a smile. I like doing that. It’s right under your nose and it’s better than being mean.

Everyone looks better when they smile. Some of my teachers smile as though they just want to get it over with. It’s like they’re visiting a disaster site. I get ticked off if people never smile, or if they smile only with their lips, not their whole face.

It’s sad when people die, but I feel they wouldn’t want you to be unhappy. You obviously can’t be happy, but don’t be depressed. That’s how I feel. It’s not worth the effort to be so sad. I might be down over something dumb for a few hours, or even a whole day, but then I’ll just forget about it.

When you smile you forget. When you remember you get sad.

Some of the guys at St. Mel’s are so emotional it’s close to unbelievable. And, it’s all a GANG OF GUYS, not even any girls. They don’t know that no one wants to hear their sob stories. They talk about how someone stole their girlfriend, how their parents are control freaks, and how their teachers don’t understand them. They want emotional support, like an IV pumping out of your face, which is like them talking.

I’m not like that. I only tell my close friends what I honestly think. I’m not going to blab it out like a sob train to the whole school.

Those guys put it all on Facebook. They tell everyone what happened, when it happened, and why it happened. It’s not worth it. Who cares? They think they have a lot of friends on Facebook. Twitter has wiped out Facebook, anyway. I’m done with it, although I’m still on Facebook all the time.

There are a butt load of jerks at St. Mel’s, and many other kinds of jerks, too. There are tools, the cocky guys, and whores. A tool will say they are your best friend. You are friends with them, you talk to them, but they go right behind your back and tell other people. So, they are tools. A cocky guy is someone who thinks they are the best at everything, even though they aren’t. They are insecure. Even if they are good at something they are so cocky about it they are annoying. A whore is a sad guy who will get with anybody, go out with anybody, and everybody is his friend.

They’re never who they really are, letting themselves be who they are, so they can’t be a real friend. A friend to EVERYBODY is NOBODY’S friend.

Who upsets me more than anything are the attention seekers, especially in class. They want attention over the dumbest things. It gets me ticked off. One guy who is in one of my classes is always raising his hand to say something dumb, or if we have to do something, he asks the teacher to come check this or that. He says he just wants to make sure he’s on the right track. He goes on and on and on. He wants all eyes on him, being the poser he is. He needs to shut up.

I just don’t like to hear their voices. It’s very annoying. The other kinds of guys who make me upset are the queer-bags. They’re the guys who are man-whores, guys who will try to get with anyone. They’re just thirsty for a partner, anyone who will pay attention to them. They would probably even steal from bullies to attract a little attention.

Bullies tick me off the most. I was bullied a lot in middle school. It was horrible. My dad would call the school, and tell them, and even go to the school. They would say, “We know, this kid, he’s a bully,” but nothing would ever happen. At St. Mel’s it’s so different. They don’t tolerate it, at all. But, guys still get bullied. It’s annoying. I know how it feels. It sucks, so they really tick me off a lot.

I’m popular at St. Mel’s because I know how to make friends with my classmates, and sophomores, too. I don’t try to win any popularity polls. That’s just how it is. I’m not modest, but I’m not conceited, either. I don’t try to be popular. I try to be nice and that translates into popularity. Not with everybody, for sure, because there are plenty of scrubs and haters in the hallways.


The only people who bite me are people, although Scar almost bit me once. I barged into my bedroom and he was sleeping on the other side of the door. My hand was in his mouth before I knew it. When he looked up it was a toss-up who was more surprised. Was it him or was it me? His tail was wagging and he was snarling at the same time. He left teeth marks behind, but no bloodshed.

Scar has personality, like me. Sometimes I think I might have been a dog in a past life because dogs will sometimes do a double take when they see me. I think they can see the inside of you. Scar always knows when I’m coming home, even though I might be only turning the corner up the street. No one else ever knows I’m home until I come through the door and ask what’s for dinner.

It’s fun running up and down the street and in the park with Scar. Dogs are so fit and fast. Dogs are my favorite people sometimes. Nobody thinks cats and dogs go to Heaven, but I think animals were there a long time ago, before any of us, NO MATTER what Mr. Rote says.


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Chapter 1


My New School Day

“Begin at the beginning,” the King said, very gravely, “and go on till you come to the end, then stop.”

I wake up at 6:30 on school days stare at the ceiling and mess with Blackie. He’s my big cat that sleeps at my feet. Sometimes he curls up under my arm with his head pressed into my armpit. I wonder how he even breathes. When it’s time to rise and shine I throw on a sweatshirt. I like going outside first thing after a long night, so I always do that right after I get out of bed.

Otherwise, somebody would tell me to do something else.

Most mornings I walk Scar, our Beagle, although he won’t go out in the rain. He’s like a hound with short legs and long ears. He’s compelled to bite strangers, too. I never interfere with that. Scar’s got a chase reflex, especially if they’re cats, squirrels, or any dog bigger than him.

We jog down Hogsback into the Metropark sometimes, but I have to be careful, because if he sees a badger it’s all over. He doesn’t think it’s an obsession, but he’s mistaken. He doesn’t know his own mind. Whenever he sees one he’s determined to catch it and it becomes all that matters.

He got his scar when he was still a puppy. There was a badger with cubs in our backyard, behind the garage, and Scar got too close to them. There was an explosion of yelps screeches barking when it happened. His face was ripped open and we had to rush him to the Animal Clinic.

I used to eat breakfast with my parents, my dad and step mom, but it was always a butt load of something. “Take your elbows off the table and pass the ketchup. Is that a clean shirt?“

There would be a quiz about what I did yesterday and what I was going to be doing today. They hardly eat together anymore, anyway. Both of them are always in a hurry to get to work, even though my dad hates his job because of the toad family whose business it is.

Now, the first thing I do after I’ve showered and gotten dressed for St. Mel’s is to call the Red Door Deli and order two Bagel Bacon Bagel Specials.

It’s the Breakfast of Champions.

There’s usually a skinny guy working there and when he answers the phone it’s always funny. He has a thick chinkster accent.


I’m, like, “Hi.”


“I want to order two Bagel Bacon Bagel Specials.”

When he repeats my order I can barely understand him. Everybody there knows me, but the Chinese guy always pretends it’s the first time he’s ever talked to me, even though he answers the phone almost every morning. He’s the one who makes the bagel specials.

The Red Door is across the street from St. Mel’s in a pint-sized strip shopping center, squeezed between Bubbles, a laundry and dry cleaning, and Sassy Beauty, a ladies hair salon. I go there every morning and since they know me they just hand me my bag and I fork over four dollars.

What time I get there for my bagels depends, although it’s never later than eight o’clock. It depends on Story’s father, who drives both of us to school. Story lives next door. His dad works at a garden center, even though their yard isn’t any better than ours, which is surprising. Story calls my cell phone when they’re ready to go and I run over.

“Pick it up, pick it up,” his dad says, pushing his way into their SUV.

He drops us off at the Red Door, I get my breakfast, and Story and I walk across the street to school.

The cafeteria is at the back of the building, which is the new part of the school. We cross the street, squeeze through between the chapel and main classroom, and go in through a side door. The chapel is topped with a gold dome, just like Notre Dame. It glows in the sun. You can see it blocks away.

Every morning there are a boat load of guys in the cafeteria. The TV’s are all on and everyone is watching whatever, which is mostly the news. The flat screens are on every wall except the far wall with the windows.  There’s DISASTER AND DESTRUCTION every morning on the FOX Morning Show, major scariness everywhere, but it doesn’t interrupt anyone’s breakfast.

I don’t listen attentively, not especially. It’s all just a lot of crap, a load of eye candy. It stimulates my sockets while I’m eating breakfast, a lollipop without the handle. But, sometimes I pay attention, especially if the news is about a helicopter crash, since I’m involved in those when I play video games on-line.

I wouldn’t want it to happen to me. It only takes a second, but sometimes forever happens in just one second. Everyone’s so burned up and broken to pieces that dentists have to be asked who they are.

Nobody knows how anybody knows which dentists to ask.

One day there was major towelhead news about al-Qaeda that caught my eye, except it wasn’t on the news. It was on the Internet. It was too gruesome for the news. It was bloody.

They caught some civilians and wouldn’t let them escape. If they tried to escape they caught them, tied them to posts, and blindfolded them. They shot them one at a time, although they don’t shoot to kill them. They shot them in the stomach. Then they went back and shot them again.

They just did it randomly. It was very weird.

They filmed it while they were doing it. They are sick butt turds. The army, our army, is totally B. A. and could take them out, but nobody is going to win that war. It’s an epic fail over there. It’s been going on forever. I hope they come here and we can just ramble on their butts.


Our family has plenty of guns, in the attic, and we have ammunition, too. I’m not sure about everything we have, though.

“I have two 12-gauge’s, a semi-automatic pistol, a .22 Sig Sauer, a big bore 14-gauge, and an AK-47 semi-automatic,” said Jack. “I have more, but the rest of it isn’t any of your business.”

Jack is like that. He lives on the third floor and doesn’t let anyone in. It’s all under lock-and-key, including the door to his room. My step mom is good with that. It wouldn’t be so good if I tried. He wears camouflage gear.  But, he’ll be gone in two years. I can’t wait for that.

Jack’s arsenal is technically my dad’s, because he bought them, but they’re really Jack’s. Dad bought them for him, but now he buys guns himself since he’s nineteen and an adult. Before that he wasn’t allowed.

We go shooting sometimes, at the Scooterz-N-Shooterz in Uniontown, and on my grandfather’s farm in Michigan. The whole family goes there every summer. It’s awesome and it’s fun. My grandfather says that whenever anyone says you don’t need a gun you’d better make sure you have one that works.

“They always want to take guns away from the people who didn’t do it,” he says, cackling like he just ate something bad.

Last summer I shot so many rounds off at the farm I got a blister on my hand and it was nasty.

I have my own gun, although it’s not a real one. It’s a G & G Carbine air soft gun. It’s not exactly real, but it looks feels acts real. It shoots BB’s instead of bullets.

Ted Nugent said the BB gun is the most important gun in the history of American weaponry. He should know. He has his own Ted Nugent-brand ammo. Air soft BB’s are plastic, not metal, but they leave a welt when they hit skin.

My dad bought it for me. It’s not from Target or anyplace like that. It cost almost $400.00. My friends Nick and Jake and I use Grudge Tactical pellets when we’re out and shooting each other. They’re coated with a powder so they leave a mark on your clothes. It isn’t just some stupid toy. It’s fully automatic and fully mechanical, too.

Or, I could knock on Jack’s door upstairs and get the real thing and shoot that.


No one likes to talk about guns at St. Mel’s, not us, and not our teachers. Mr. Rote, our religion teacher, gave us the news Church rules say self-defense is all right, and told us all about St. Aquinas. He said it’s best to shoot first.

“It’s your responsibility to defend your faith, your family, and your country,” he said.

It’s a duty to whale on bad men and terrorists. He didn’t say much more than that. He doesn’t like talking about guns too much. We don’t have metal detectors at St. Mel’s like they do at public schools, but if anyone ever brought a gun to school that would be the end.

They would never be allowed back.

You can wear pajamas to public school, but at St. Mel’s we have to wear a dress shirt and tie, dressy pants, and shoes. You can’t even have too much style in your hair. When you’re in a Catholic school there’s more expected of you. If you’re a Mel’s man or if you go to Ignatius, or any Catholic-whatever school, everyone expects you to be a good person.

What you do in public school is up to you, which isn’t always a good thing.


When I was in middle school the bigger kids would make fun of smaller kids with learning disabilities. They always picked on the smaller ones. They would walk right up to them, start being all mean, and push them around. They would go after the ones with ADHD or Tourette’s, edge on them, and make fun of them.

From 6th grade on it was all about abusing kids with disabilities, especially in gym class. There was a whole group of them, Tristan, Justin, and the other Noah. They were their own little bad posse. I hated those kids. They were complete jerks. I would try to help, as long as the monsters weren’t there, the ones who say they don’t punch you in the back, they punch you in the face.

They were the ones you might want to shoot.

“You shouldn’t act like that,” I told them whenever I could.

“Shut up.”

“Leave them alone, make fun of somebody else.”

But, they just wouldn’t stop. It wasn’t like they were in a classroom, so they could keep doing it and doing it. They thought they were so cool. That’s how they got the little kids to like them.

That’s the thing about public schools and Catholic schools. Guys don’t do that at Catholic schools. I’m sure some do, but truly, not like that. So many public schooler’s are jerks. They learn English by watching cartoons. They can be God-awful.

If a teacher at a Catholic school got wind of anything like that there would be no trouble recognizing the mess you were in. All hell would break loose. When you’re in a Catholic school there’s a lot more expected of you. You’re expected to be responsible and be a better person. You have to take charge of yourself and carry the cat by the tail. It’s a big change when you leave public school for good.

There they have to explain everything.

The food is better at St. Mel’s than it is at public schools, where it’s mostly grown in tubes boxes cans. The cooks carry X-Acto knives instead of spatulas. At St. Mel’s we have real cooks and we’re served whole grains, fruits and vegetables, and no sugar drinks are allowed. The milk is low fat. It doesn’t pay to be fat at St. Mel’s.

But, I still bring my Bagel Bacon Bagel Specials most mornings, because we don’t get enough food.

There are rules about everything, even about how many calories we can get. I don’t get enough for cross-country and the football players always bellyache about the portions. Football is the most important thing at St. Mel’s. It’s so important it’s totally important. Everybody knows where the goalposts are. We won states last year, so this year we are the defending Division I state champions.

When school started in the fall the St. Mel’s Warriors were 5th in the USA Today poll and 6th in the ESPN poll. That’s in the whole country. That’s how good we are. At St. Mel’s it’s either football season or it’s waiting for football season. We say it’s faith, family, and football. Sometimes it almost seems like it means more than religion at St. Mel’s.

It puts pep in everybody’s step when we win. I tried football in grade school, but it didn’t work out. I was too under-sized and then I broke my collarbone. Now I love running.

The football players boycotted lunch one day. It was a big stir. My friend Rick, who is a 6-foot-3-inch 220-pound linebacker, said he burns more than 3,000 calories during three hours of weight training and practice after school.

“A lot of us are starting to get hungry even before the practice starts,” he complained to one of the vice-principals. “Our metabolisms are all sped up.”

“I could not be more passionate about this,” the food service supervisor said, making a speech the next day before lunch.

“I want to solve this problem.”

She had everybody fill out cards about what they did and didn’t like about our meals.

Our cafeteria is the nicest one I’ve ever seen. There are skylights over the center atrium, polished wood floors, oblong folding tables for eight, and ergonomic chairs. Everything is super modern. Somebody’s dad died and they gave St. Mel’s a ton of money, millions of it. The whole school is modern, even though it was built in 1949, on land that used to be a feeding stop for cattle trains.

Back then if you got detention you had to help dig parts of the new basement.

Whenever I check my cell phone and it’s 8:25 I wolf down what’s left of my Bagel Bacon Bagel Specials and get going because my first class is at 8:30. Being late for Roman Catholic class would be the worst thing I could do to start my day.



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